Hi there Sione, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! This information is very interesting. I didn't know that and probably wouldn't have if you didn't blog about it. I like that what you learnt is organised in three different parts clearly.
This reminds me of another story like this I have seen. It seems that everyone is doing bright colours. It makes them look very fun and interesting.
To improve you could give the information a title at the top of the upside down triangle. Just so then anyone who's reading it can see what it is about before reading it.
I wonder what the next coldest temperature has been? Good job on your work.
Hi there Sione, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWOW! This information is very interesting. I didn't know that and probably wouldn't have if you didn't blog about it. I like that what you learnt is organised in three different parts clearly.
This reminds me of another story like this I have seen. It seems that everyone is doing bright colours. It makes them look very fun and interesting.
To improve you could give the information a title at the top of the upside down triangle. Just so then anyone who's reading it can see what it is about before reading it.
I wonder what the next coldest temperature has been?
Good job on your work.
Kind regards,
Abby.