Saint Pius x moment in time writing.

Draft 1

I saw fancy cups and magnificent painting on the wall

I heard people singing

I felt cheerful because I was singing songs.

I wondered if the school liked the tasty  banana cake.

Draft 2

I heard room 3s fantastic singing.

I saw the school showing respect as they walked into church.

I felt like I was in heaven when ate the cake.

I wondered how st pius felt when he walked to school barefoot.

Draft 3

I heard magnificent singing  as we sung the songs.

I saw children from our school reading scripture passage.

I felt like I had the best banana cake in the whole world.

I wonder how we got  the name saint pius x for our school.

Draft 4

I heard father preaching about saint pius x.

I saw banana cakes that looked really delicious .

I felt like I was learning more about  saint pius x.

I wonder why our school choices the name saint pius x  

I am learning how to use my sense to do our moment in time writing.

moment in time

Name:Sione

Date:27.7.18

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Title:The sickest day of my life.

I heard the zipline zooming down thought the old dreadful river.

I saw the green trees towering over each other.

I felt sick as the zip line speeds down the revolting river.

I wonder if I will make to the other side.

silent reading word types

I did not finish it because I was not focusing

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Card number 46 was a challenging because you have to read
and look at the characters that you want to write about .     

Card number 31 was not that difficult because the answer comes from you.

Read theory slides

Moment in time writitng

Name:Sione

Date:27.7.18

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Title:The sickest day of my life.

I heard the zipline zooming down thought the old dreadful river.

I saw the green trees towering over each other.

I felt sick as the zip line speeds down the revolting river.

I wonder if I will make to the other side.

typing speed test

I am practicing my typing so I can be quicker and more accurate. This will help me finish my work faster. Today I got 31 WPM Last week I got  28WPM I improved because I was focused.