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On one ordinary day I went fishing and everything was
fine until an alligator attacked me .
I was terrified I couldn’t move , so I whacked it with a knife and
then it got angrier than ever .
It tried to bite me but I shifted to the corner , and
then it went back to the sea and the alligator
followed me to shore.
When I was getting off the boat it came back and bit me on the leg . I called for help but nobody came , I just wanted to go back home . After 1 hour someone came and got me off the boat safely and then I went to the hospital . To develop our creative
fine until an alligator attacked me .
I was terrified I couldn’t move , so I whacked it with a knife and
then it got angrier than ever .
It tried to bite me but I shifted to the corner , and
then it went back to the sea and the alligator
followed me to shore.
Hi my name is latoia i really like your illerstauiton next time could you make it bigger
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