60th Jubilee celebration.

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES

to describe what

happened from our point of view

We are learning to use WOW!

words like adjectives and verbs

to add impact for our audience

(people who read our writing).

Create

Draft three

I saw my group nervously getting dressed  for the cultural group performance.

I felt happy when we finished our culture group performance because I was
frightened of dancing in front of everyone.

I heard  magnificent singing from the cook island group and Maori group.

I wondered how other people felt as they were performing in front of everyone.