Moment in time writitng

Name:Sione

Date:27.7.18

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Title:The sickest day of my life.

I heard the zipline zooming down thought the old dreadful river.

I saw the green trees towering over each other.

I felt sick as the zip line speeds down the revolting river.

I wonder if I will make to the other side.